tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-685065582281848343.post2120599577357935060..comments2023-09-28T03:28:17.063-04:00Comments on 3 Ring Binder: Chickeeta and the Emoticons ~:>Lynnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12178771612031280593noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-685065582281848343.post-84034451736621627512009-06-15T23:27:46.754-04:002009-06-15T23:27:46.754-04:00How musical--I love it! Favorite line: ". . ...How musical--I love it! Favorite line: ". . . she talked like she was in an opera." I know people like that. Now if DD had written ". . . and she talked like she was in a <b>soap</b> opera," I know people like that, too. In fact I seem to be living in one these days. . .Christinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09399801831076566326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-685065582281848343.post-62428734003173930822009-06-08T13:59:45.377-04:002009-06-08T13:59:45.377-04:00Well, the harmony was my favorite part, but still,...Well, the harmony was my favorite part, but still, the rest was quite nice, and I didn't even need to "read" the emoticons to understand the meaning. BRAVO!Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16540136429022445258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-685065582281848343.post-14968501599149626362009-06-08T12:59:40.043-04:002009-06-08T12:59:40.043-04:00She did.
I suggested adding "in harmony&quo...She did. <br /><br />I suggested adding "in harmony" in the last line to tie-in the music theme she had going and to which she immediately agreed. I then suggested replacing two exclamation points (at the end of the first and third sentences) with periods. She needed to be convinced about that suggestion. <br /><br />She hasn't gotten to the part about "don't use foreign words" in TAoF yet. Me neither. <br /><br />Merci!Lynnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12178771612031280593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-685065582281848343.post-65093912499230444482009-06-08T12:37:44.888-04:002009-06-08T12:37:44.888-04:00Did she really write that whole story? I think it...Did she really write that whole story? I think it's quite good. Has she been reading The Art of Fiction?Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16540136429022445258noreply@blogger.com